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You're getting there. I hear less synth presets, but now we have Percussion to deal with.

The claps, do they have any effect connected to them?

Pacman Pill!

Magik-Waffle responds:

HAO DO U KNO?! :O

~Preset-Hell~

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The melody and everything is fine, but why so many presets?

Magik-Waffle responds:

I dunno. Cause I suck perhaps?

~:0~

Hmmmm

Well the alarm was a tiny little obnoxious. I would have turned it down a tad

The melody was more impressive here though. I like the bells. Perhaps a little static megaphone effect in the background would have made it even better

I would say keep working on it. If you want a 10/10 from me, cranky basslines and alarms won't cut it. Though that only means you have room for improvement. Better to keep improving than to just fall flat on your bum, eh?

Come to think of it, though... it's about damn time I finished my latest song. I am lazy compared to you atm :<

take care m8, see you next song

KrazeyOne responds:

Thanks a bunch for the advice, Surge. :D

And, yes, it is time to pick up some slack. XD

See ya when its out!

~:o~

You've gotten better. Quite a bunch better.

Nice change of bass.

At the half point, where you've got that strings, I would have messed around with the percussion a little. Stayed consistent but changed it a bit.

Other than that, I can definitely hear the progress you've made since before. Good biz.

And don't worry, I like hearing from you anyway. Keep 'em comin'.
:3

~Surge

KrazeyOne responds:

Yes! I got the 10! XD Thanks much, Surge. If you need an honest review, you know where to find me. :D

~Sweet~

Wow, I like the theme and composition.

The slow growing effect ("whrrrrr"), albeit a good effect, I think was a tad too strong, though. Also, you could do more with the progression. Climax, perhaps?

It's very good, though, I must say. This is better than a few others I've heard from you!

~Surge

KrazeyOne responds:

Thanks much, Surge. I'm still working for your 10. :D

~Interesting~

Hmmm, very interesting, though of course will need some mastering when done.

~Surge

Phoog responds:

Yeah it's not even mixed here, and hardly started. I just wanted some comments on the melody. I was going for a Headhunterz type feel. Jumpy and a bit darker. Cleary, I was miles off.

~:3 Hmmm~

The intro was very good, imho. I like the chord progression.

However, I think the percussion was a bit too strong there. Quite frankly the only potentially bad thing to stand out...

Perhaps if you let up on the intensity, filtering and volume, it would fit much more.

Overall, though, it felt good to listen, m8.

~Surge

KrazeyOne responds:

yeah, i was wondering whether or not they were too loud. :D Thanks for the input, buddy. :D

~:3~

It's likely just because of my taste, but the percussion I think could use some work... the claps almost sound too hard (despite the obvious intentions), but almost to a degree that would hurt the piece.

I like the buildup, though. Very nice :)
~Surge

KrazeyOne responds:

lhank ye. :D i appreciate it. :D

~:3~

Ah, the ol' Lightspeed Pad, that was a nice addition thar

I noticed quite a few other memorable presets, but remarkably enough, that didn't get in the way of the clarity or quality of the sound, in other words it didn't sound as cheesy as one might expect from those instruments, so that's a feat in itself

I suppose the only thing I would think of fixing here is the snare drum; it's almost too loud, and a larger amount of percussion/progression would be nice.

And yes, you conveyed the mellowness very well, that was very important ;3

~4/5

KrazeyOne responds:

well, thank you very much. :D i did get the snare comment before from a different song, so second opinion checked. thanks again for the critique. :D

~Chaotic :3~

A nitty gritty kind of mix here, a touch of raw power. Very nice, can see it for a mixed BGM

I would say just watch out for dynamics and possible tuning issues, like I heard around 1:24

otherwise, very nice, m8 :3

KrazeyOne responds:

ah, good point, man. thanks for the feedback. i really do appreciate it. :D

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