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Well well.

Very nice. You could've done more with the bass, though the flow was pretty nice and small breakdown was beaty. As in, it had a good beat.
Overall, a keeper.

Decent beat

Are you adding lyrics?

Not feelin it

Although it was alright, it could have not have been so monotonous and repetitive. Plus, I didn't hear any basses.

Just keep trying and learn from others' advise.

Impressive!

I know how hard it would be for ME to play that well. I can't ride the neck like that. Pts for effort through the roof.

This song lives up to your name. Very well done.

DarKsidE555 responds:

Thanks man, glad you enjoyed it! Sry for the late reply I was like back in teh future! lol

Excellent!

A great addition to the portal. I suppose it could be used in a sci-fi related flash.

Also, it reminded me of the Matrix. A nice, flowing ambient beat.

Thanks for your vote, LtSurge659! You voted 5 for SR - Universe, raising its score from 3.75 to 4.00.

SineRider responds:

It is a bit like sci-fi

I may hit you back soon

Effort pts.

I've played bettern' this, though it's a fine try.
Always shoot for excellence, and more will come.

You could work harder on it, then resubmit it. I'd advise incorporating a metronome, so's you can time yourself, because it was off-beat. Also, use the counter-melody after playing the main melody, for diversity.

There's so much SH-- you can do with a guitar, man. Don't be afraid to pull into it. PLaying by ear has always been my favourite pastime of music, and what better way to produce a cover than using a musical instrument?

SevereDementia responds:

It was me looking up the tabs for the first time and then recording it. I didnt mind that it sounded horrible. Im not one for video game music anyway.

Short, but sweet!

Is this recorded live or am I just a n00b?

DarKsidE555 responds:

Live? I guess it's better to say one by one through a mixer. ;)

Thanks for the comment.

Nice

I really need more relaxing, Ambient music.
Luckily for me, I found at least one artist who knows exactly what he's friggin doing.

The clarity was the only shortcoming. Perhaps it was in order to save space, but the bass seemed to overbalance and its fuzzy after-sound could be heard in the background.

Not like I could do any better, though. See for yourself! ++

Nice work

On your part, this song was quite well-done, though only one thing bothered me...

Despite how well it was pulled off, there was only a small climax. A song this long should be built stronger and included diversity. Bass is missing, that or the whole thing is bass.

Perhaps its just my tase in music...

Other than that it was pretty well done, clear and had good rhythm.

jor182 responds:

thanks men... bout the bass thing, im not bass player or drummer, so that i just tried to do my best... but thanks for taking the time and review it!

Quite well!

The only real problem I can find is... the main synth is a little overbalanced. It takes over the song in a commanding way, and it can't be "in your face".

Otherwise, it's pretty good. I'm not terribly good myself, though music theory is a great asset of mine. Good luck on this project, man.

DSMagnum responds:

I don't know how many times people have told me about the lead. I know it's too loud, and it's already been fixed for the final.

Thanks for reviewing!

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