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Nice work

On your part, this song was quite well-done, though only one thing bothered me...

Despite how well it was pulled off, there was only a small climax. A song this long should be built stronger and included diversity. Bass is missing, that or the whole thing is bass.

Perhaps its just my tase in music...

Other than that it was pretty well done, clear and had good rhythm.

jor182 responds:

thanks men... bout the bass thing, im not bass player or drummer, so that i just tried to do my best... but thanks for taking the time and review it!

Quite well!

The only real problem I can find is... the main synth is a little overbalanced. It takes over the song in a commanding way, and it can't be "in your face".

Otherwise, it's pretty good. I'm not terribly good myself, though music theory is a great asset of mine. Good luck on this project, man.

DSMagnum responds:

I don't know how many times people have told me about the lead. I know it's too loud, and it's already been fixed for the final.

Thanks for reviewing!

I would'nt say it was good.

It sounds like you did it in less than 10 minutes...

the-nacho responds:

I did, lol.

Well...

It wasn't bad. But that's the thing: it wasn't very impressive. I did like the beat, though synths were sorta quiet, so percussion took over.

Jimbobsthebest responds:

Thanks man, I'll take that into account.

James

Well...

It did sound like yer brain died! lol just kiddin'.

There's Originality in it, but it's not well-organized. You can get better, with time.

If you want some inspiration, take a look at mine. I started pretty bad myself, and I doubt I'm way better (:?)

New-Milkman responds:

Yes, organization is something I have to work on. A lot. I bet in my next song, it won't sound very organized, but one of these days....

I took a look at your stuff, and you've got some really good remixes, like TS Streets +1 and SM64. It IS way better than mine.

Holy Hell

Did you live-record this, or did you use some program I haven't heard of, cause it's incredible.

Nice riffs, it really sounds like a live recording.

Quickbeam responds:

You mean a 'Studio Recording'?

Work... harder...

It's a nice little loop, I guess. Keep practicing.

Gorekiller responds:

hehe ! I knew you would said that ! Yeah, I haven't put a lot of effort in this but... I knew how to use MIDI music ! That was just an experiment ! Okay then ! I'll work harder next time ! Thanks for the kind words !

How fast was this made again?

It loops 3 times and doesn't change. Granted, it's ok, but there doesn't seem to be a lot of effort in it. I do like F-Zero... maybe that's what I'll remix, but not Mute City prolly.

I don't own but I don't suck. Nice try.

Gorekiller responds:

Hemmm...actually, I've spent 2 days making this... but I agree I should add more effort. Indeed, I've written the notes with a MIDI software called Compositeur. But I didn't play the electric piano as usual. That's why there doesn't seem to be a lot of effort in it. But I don't agree it doesn't change. The third time, the drums are twice faster. If you want me to rerereremake (omfg) this song, then tell me. Thanks for the early feedback. What ? 0.50/5 ? GODDAMNIT !! Why are you so harsh with me ? :( What have I ever done to you ? Why no one here likes me ?

Interesting...

Yet it has the feeling of repetitiveness. All in all, I'd use it for a short flash.
I'm not sure how much help that was, but for more, you can drop by and check out my music.

Add some tech! LtSurge659

TheAmateurAnimator responds:

Yes, I think it is repetitive as well, but that was kind of the sound I was going for.

Cool!

Great work. I have a way to go before I get really good. Gotta hear my rivals make descent music!
Excellent.

itsameyayo responds:

You'll get there man! Just keep workin' hard at it, and you'll get there : D

-I need competition, it helps me grow : D

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